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Author Topic: The Degenerate  (Read 6797 times)
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« Reply #60 on: September 04, 2017, 12:01:47 PM »

Thanks for the feedback Dotys.  I do think I specified Dutch heritage in one chapter, but it's interesting to me that that's what came to mind for you.

Damo's cave was not something I was going to add before.  Would you mind explaining in more detail what about it threw you for a loop?   Was the writing confusing?  Did you not enjoy the content?  Too much genre shift?

Thanks.
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